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Home: Academic: Classes: Ad Writing

 

Advertising Writing

Dr. Thomas Gould Contact me
219C Kedzie Office Hours:
532-3449

What You Will Learn
Materials to Help You Learn
How You Will Demonstrate What You Have Learned and Grading Rubric
Class Participation and Attendance
Value of Your Work (grades)
Policies
Class Schedule (check this often -- it will CHANGE!)
Helpful Links

Videos
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Fall 2009 Participants

What you will learn

Blurred images don't inspire much loyalty among consumers. You all know about the lack of brand loyalty in the detergent field. It was found here in Chicago that less than two percent of housewives stick to the same brand of detergent for as long as one year. By coincidence, the researchers tell us that there is only one brand of detergent which has any well-defined image in the consumer mind. All the others are wishy-washy neuters.

David Ogilvy, 1955

Everything changes, including this syllabus and this profession: advertising is about online, about entertainment, about branding, about culture, and about measurement. This course will attempt to introduce you to all of these areas, with the understanding that learning is not a two-hour-a-day, 16-week phenomenon. You will succeed in this only if you are committed to put the time, your time, into learning outside of class and outside of this semester.This course is an immersion into the craft of writing—specifically, advertising writing within the online (mainly) and offline environments. It is the first writing course in the School of Journalism and Mass Communication's advertising sequence.

We will do a lot of writing in this class, some online, some in print.In the course, you will learn that ad writing starts with clarity. Then, by knowing the audience, product, market, competition, and brand, the writer can communicate. At its best, the writing in an ad communicates the brand attributes and motivates positioned (targeted) buyers. At its worse, this writing is predictable, stale or disconnected from the product . . . the most offensive of these being the last. A funny ad that does not communicate anything but something funny is, well, funny, but in the end worse than worthless -- it can damage the brand equity.

We will do a lot of writing in this class, covering a spectrum of advertising media, from traditional print ads, to direct mail, to radio (audio) and television (video). This is a challenging course: you will start building a portfolio that will follow you through your time in the school.

Diversity in Advertising

We support Standard 3 of the Accrediting Committee for Education in Journalism and Mass Communication that urges recognition of the contributions, roles and involvement of women and minorities in mass communication. Students in this class are encouraged to a) identify contributions of women and minorities, b) suggest ways the class might reach a better understanding and c) identify speakers, articles, books and events that will enhance understanding.

Honor Code

Kansas State University has an Honor System based on personal integrity, which is presumed to be sufficient assurance that, in academic matters, one's work is performed honestly and without unauthorized assistance. Undergraduate and graduate students, by registration, acknowledge the jurisdiction of the Honor System. The policies and procedures of the Honor System apply to all full and part-time students enrolled in undergraduate and graduate courses on-campus, off-campus, and via distance learning. The honor system website can be reach via the following URL: www.ksu.edu/honor . A component vital to the Honor System is the inclusion of the Honor Pledge which applies to all assignments, examinations, or other course work undertaken by students. The Honor Pledge is implied, whether or not it is stated: "On my honor, as a student, I have neither given nor received unauthorized aid on this academic work." A grade of XF can result from a breach of academic honesty. The F indicates failure in the course; the X indicates the reason is an Honor Pledge violation. The honor system web site can be reach via the following URL: www.ksu.edu/honor

Statements for Academic Accommodations for Students with Disabilities

Any student with a disability who needs an accommodation or other assistance in this course should make an appointment to speak with me as soon as possible.

Statement Defining Expectations for Classroom Conduct

All student activities in the University, including this course, are governed by the Student Judicial Conduct Code as outlined in the Student Government Association By Laws, Article VI, Section 3, number 2. Students that engage in behavior that disrupts the learning environment may be asked to leave the class.

Statement for Copyright Notification

Copyright 2009 (Thomas Gould) refers to this syllabus and all lectures.  During this course students are prohibited from selling notes to or being paid for taking notes by any person or commercial firm without the express written permission of me.

Campus Safety Statement

Kansas State University is committed to providing a safe teaching and learning environment for student and faculty members. In order to enhance your safety in the unlikely case of a campus emergency make sure that you know where and how to quickly exit your classroom and how to follow any emergency directives. To view additional campus emergency information go to the University's main page and click on the Emergency Information button.

Materials to help you learn to learn

We have no textbook for this course. Instead, I will provide links to readings that will help you understand the lectures and assignments. If you do not have a laptop with Internet access, you can access the readings via the school library computers, or those in the Hale Library Second Floor common room.

Plase refer to the SCHEDULE for readings.


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How you will demonstrate what you have learned

One, I expect students to take active participation in class discussions and in-class ad work. I also urge you to come to class with questions and opinions about assigned readings and any advertising you encounter that you like or are curious about. Consequently, you should pay increased attention to advertising and relate it to what we are talking about in class. I will ask individuals in class to talk about the assigned reading. We will create ads almost everyday; so, missing a day is missing a grade. Stay healthy!

Two, you will be able to demonstrate your ability in class to apply the principles you learn in this course to an advertising problem by working in a cooperative and competitive learning experience to develop ads for a product or service located on campus. This semester we will be working with a service on campus of your choice that you now know little about. The Hale Library is a good place to start. But I leave it up to you to expand your choices, if you wish. The exact potential areas will be a topic for us the third class or so: start now thinking about it and doing some exploration.

We will work with the components of SWOT

It basically includes

Strengths

Weaknesses

Opportunities

Threats

From the this comes the Need/Problem. Let me say right here that all advertising starts with identifying the SWOT, then the Need/Problem. Miss these steps and you have boring, generic stuff.

Once the Need/Problem is identified, you'll generate the . . .

Brand Statement: a simple sentence that boils down everything you've learned.

Creative Concept (X-Factor): The creative device you will use to accomplish the Brand Statement.

All written work will be graded based on this rubric. Please note, as little subjectivity will be involved as possible in grading. That is, if you lose points, it will be because of writing errors (grammar, syntax, etc.). Of course, incredibility bad creative that doesn't connect with the brand statement would be hard to miss and even harder to reward. We'll talk about how to avoid this.

Grading Rubric
  Full Credit Less Credit No Credit
Clarity No grammatical or spelling errors. Writing is clear and understandable with no confusion. Narrative flows smoothly throughout the paper. Three grammatical or spelling errors. Only two awkward sentences, Writing is choppy. Six or more grammatical or spelling errors. Writing is very difficult to follow. Tense changes more than twice.
Organization Ideas are presented in logical fashion with an argument that leads to a conclusion (the brand statement) Ideas are presented, but they are poorly connected and insufficient to make final conclusion.Some ideas are not relevant to the argument. Overall the analysis lacks cohesion. Mere listing of facts with no synthesis or relevance.

Common errors I've seen the past 10 years are: comma splices, run on sentences, syntax errors, wrong words, and run-on, repetitive paragraphs. If you are unfamiliar with the definition of any of these errors, check them out on Wikipedia.

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Class attendance and participation

I believe learning is enhanced by active involvement in class discussion and activities. That's why I will ask questions to elicit your opinions and knowledge of the reading material. It is impossible to participate in class without attending class (as proved by Einstein). I would add only that attendance and final grades have been found to be highly correlated. I ask for your cooperation in being seated when class begins. If you are late (defined as arriving AFTER I do), you can be certain you will be one of those asked to respond to the readings. Do not be late.


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Determinants of your course grade

Here's what will be expected by the end of the course:

One: Client Work - Team based (40%)

    • SWOT (10%)
    • Brand Statement (5%)
    • Creative Concept (5%)
    • Creative (20%) - 5 TV (one shot) and 3 print ad ideas

Two: In class work: 15% 15 ads/commercials/concepts

Three: Homework: 15% 15 ads/commercials/concepts

Three: Responses: 20 %
Ten of these to statements posted on KSOL -- ad writing site's message board. I'll grade these a few days after they are due. The importance here is to think and then post.

Four: Midterm: 10% - generally multiple choice and short answer with essay option.

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Some important policies

If you cannot take the mid-term at the scheduled time on the scheduled date, you must talk to me in advance. If you have a legitimate (medical) excuse, and if you talk to me (or e-mail me) in advance, I will allow you to take the exam on another date. You have one week to make up the mid-term. It is your responsibility to arrange the make up exam. The final cannot be moved from its appointed day or time. If you make flight arrangements prior to the final, I will assume you want to skip the final and receive a zero.

I do not need a physician excuses for your missing a class. However, no makeup ads assignments will be offered, so stay well.

Page last updated November 12, 2009